In China, several days ago, doctors
told to 66-year-old man that actually he is a woman. Although he looks like man
and all his life he was thinking that he is man, he was born as woman. It is
very rare case and it happened because he has two hereditary diseases. Nevertheless,
he decided to stay as a man, and I think he made right choice. Actually,
nowadays to change sex is not a problem. A lot of people in the world change
their sex and moreover, it becoming more common. I don’t know why people do it,
and I think it is not right. However, if I were woman I would finally
understand female logic! And I think it is the best thing that can happen in
this situation. Nonetheless, being women has some positive aspects. For example,
usually they don’t care about money because it is husband’s responsible. So, I
would go shopping, exercising or to spa salons on free time as usually women
do. Also, I would spend a lot of time talking with my friends. On the other
hand, I think to be a woman is harder than man. First of all, woman is mother
and it is really hard and responsible labor to raise children, to raise them as
good people. Also, women devote all their life to family, and they are more dedicated
than men.
In conclusion, we are all
people, and we should be grateful for life that God gave us. And it does not
matter, women we are, or we are men.
Hi Kanat,
ReplyDeleteI really like your hook. I also agree with your ideas. Also, I really like your conclusion and agree with your statement which is "we are all people, and we should be grateful for life that God gave us".
..Good Job..
Hi Kanat,
ReplyDeleteI liked your conclusion, I think you write the best of us.
Also, your short story in the beginning interested me to continue reading.
Good job.
After reading your first sentence, I had to google and look for that news story. I read it. Crazy! I agree with you that being a woman is probably harder than being a man.
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